tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post1050729834171489834..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Summer Sunset Haiku by Anna YinChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-67151159199736365472013-06-13T07:38:56.013-04:002013-06-13T07:38:56.013-04:00The effective use of alliteration and the unexpect...The effective use of alliteration and the unexpected and yet powerful concluding phrase, (especially the concluding word, "sunset, " not "setting sun") make this haiku thematically and emotionally effective.<br /><br />Note: In the translations, I use "setting sun" not "sunset." It's because it is more succinct and sounds better.<br /><br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com