tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post12490011630806636..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Mother’s Hair Haiku by Peggy Willis LylesChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-7106076211896521282020-05-10T20:38:47.420-04:002020-05-10T20:38:47.420-04:00Ls 1&2 sketch the scene and set the moon while...Ls 1&2 sketch the scene and set the moon while L3 works effectively at two levels, literal and figurative, enhancing the visual and emotional appeal of the haiku. And Peggy's heartfelt mother's hair haiku reminds me of one of my own below:<br /><br />eightieth birthday<br />I comb winter moonlight<br />into mother's hair<br /><br />Grand Prize, 11th Yamadera Basho Memorial Museum English Haiku Contest, 2019Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com