tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post1285132864129726544..comments2024-03-27T11:10:57.384-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Glitter Haiku by Denis M. GarrisonChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-50083637444437665212016-07-05T09:04:34.032-04:002016-07-05T09:04:34.032-04:00In such a short space of 8 words (10 syllables), D...In such a short space of 8 words (10 syllables), Denis successfully creates a chilling atmosphere through the effective juxtaposition of visually and emotionally resonant images. And the unexpected yet powerful last line lifts the poem up a notch, revealing much more than what's stated. <br /><br />An excellent example of a haiku noir.<br /><br />For more information about haiku noir, see my "To the Lighthouse" post, "Haiku Noir," which can be accessed at http://neverendingstoryhaikutanka.blogspot.ca/2014/07/to-lighthouse-haiku-noir.htmlChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com