tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post1381310683341195663..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Autumn Wind Haiku by Rita OdehChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-27697162986728245712016-09-29T05:10:04.160-04:002016-09-29T05:10:04.160-04:00Thanks,Chen-ou, for your stunning feedback and pro...Thanks,Chen-ou, for your stunning feedback and project.Rita Odehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01201493655746508261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-13032289311214687212016-09-29T05:09:36.063-04:002016-09-29T05:09:36.063-04:00Thanks,Chen-ou, for your stunning feedback and pro...Thanks,Chen-ou, for your stunning feedback and project.Rita Odehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01201493655746508261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-66004848926528303912016-09-28T08:45:50.360-04:002016-09-28T08:45:50.360-04:00Rita's effective use of the zoom-in technique ...Rita's effective use of the zoom-in technique and vivid imagery lifts the poem out of the ordinary. And her visually and emotionally evocative haiku reminds me of Brian's comment I posted yesterday:<br /><br />The leaf does not grasp or grieve its last day.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com