tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post1946002581390919599..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Summerwood Haiku by David McMurrayChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-88451977701886107952014-04-12T08:59:18.794-04:002014-04-12T08:59:18.794-04:00Hi! Charlie:
Interesting reading. Thanks for shar...Hi! Charlie:<br /><br />Interesting reading. Thanks for sharing.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-50873540161267008432014-04-11T22:31:06.907-04:002014-04-11T22:31:06.907-04:00The image also raises question whether first names...The image also raises question whether first names were carved there in a heart at an earlier season such as spring. But the surname is loner lasting and "deeper"charlie smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18074473795793136639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-21373512336881806502014-04-11T08:12:00.279-04:002014-04-11T08:12:00.279-04:00Thanks for sharing.
Chen-ou LiuThanks for sharing.<br /><br />Chen-ou LiuChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-69061222798384603652014-04-11T00:30:30.046-04:002014-04-11T00:30:30.046-04:00I went through the poem, I got another feeling for...I went through the poem, I got another feeling for this poem.May I show this feeling by Chinese.<br />漫天蜻蜓現,<br />刨冰灑落入皿中,<br />暑意隱行蹤。ftatsahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10494035896693854003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-76850182764262569612014-04-10T07:43:49.997-04:002014-04-10T07:43:49.997-04:00This is a so-called Ichibutsu Shitate (one-scene/i...This is a so-called Ichibutsu Shitate (one-scene/image/theme/object haiku), a "single-object poem, which [focuses] on a single topic and in which the [haiku flows] smoothly from start to finish, without leap or gap found in the "composition poem" (that reads a poem with two juxtaposed images/topics...; Traces of Dreams: Landscape, Cultural Memory, and the Poetry of Bashō, p.111)<br /><br />L1 sets the theme for the poem while Ls 2&3 enhance the tone and mood.<br /><br />The collocation of "deeply" and "summerwood" adds emotional weight to the poem.<br /><br />Note: Compared with springwood, summerwood is "the harder and heavier outer portion of an annual ring of wood that is made up of small thick-walled cells and develops late in the growing season."Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com