tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post2098217135200331454..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Autumn Nap Haiku by Keitha KeyesChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-39982571388554771162013-09-10T04:36:28.802-04:002013-09-10T04:36:28.802-04:00Oh, this is lovely! I imagine the sun warming the ...Oh, this is lovely! I imagine the sun warming the poet's hair as it slides down it, taking the chill out of the autumn afternoon. It also reminded me of my late father's hands for some reason. I must remember to stroke my daughter's hair, because that simple act that reveals so much love has stayed with me for years. Thank you for sharing this piece.<br /><br />marionAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-67873306636006305022013-09-03T00:11:06.825-04:002013-09-03T00:11:06.825-04:00L1 works well as a context-setting line, and Ls 2&...L1 works well as a context-setting line, and Ls 2&3 enhance the visual and emotive aspects of the poem.<br /><br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com