tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post2324898275834220548..comments2024-03-27T11:10:57.384-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Circle of Silence Haiku by Peggy HeinrichChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-41140938621992324632015-09-02T17:11:37.316-04:002015-09-02T17:11:37.316-04:00Beautiful. I especially enjoy Wilson's (Billie...Beautiful. I especially enjoy Wilson's (Billie's). thanks.Anoukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04722342594172243523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-40697099051392244872015-06-30T07:39:04.731-04:002015-06-30T07:39:04.731-04:00L1 establishes the thematic context while the sile...L1 establishes the thematic context while the silence described in Ls 2&3 is not only amplified by the textual fact that there is no human figure mentioned in the poem, but also layered with multiple meanings. A fresh take on campfire haiku.<br /><br />And Peggy's haiku and Billie Wilson's below could be read as a pair of responsive haiku:<br /><br />campfire sparks —<br />someone outside the circle<br />starts another song<br /><br />The Heron's Nest, 12:2, June 2010:Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com