tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post2337456408668205205..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Winter Drizzle Haiku by Tzod EarfChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-14837256140984967562014-03-13T08:56:03.001-04:002014-03-13T08:56:03.001-04:00H! Marion:
Yes, I agree with your concluding comm...H! Marion:<br /><br />Yes, I agree with your concluding comment.<br /><br />This is a heartfelt haiku with a psychological bent.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-26070291588793987002014-03-13T06:22:54.450-04:002014-03-13T06:22:54.450-04:00Intriguing. The 'voice in my mind' makes m...Intriguing. The 'voice in my mind' makes me want to know more. It is obviously a persistent voice if it is like the raindrops and perhaps sad...nice.<br /><br />marionAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-22506092398173835692014-03-09T08:04:45.605-04:002014-03-09T08:04:45.605-04:00L1 sets the context, seasonal and emotive, while L...L1 sets the context, seasonal and emotive, while Ls2 &3 describe the speaker's state of mind. Combined with the emotionally effective use of '...,' the shift (from the physical world to the inner one) adds psychological depth to the poem.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com