tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post2455702339395481369..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: One Man's Maple Moon: Setting Sun Tanka by Shloka ShankarChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-27356799267670989112015-12-31T09:21:38.347-05:002015-12-31T09:21:38.347-05:00The riveting prefatory image in the upper verse is...The riveting prefatory image in the upper verse is logically metaphoric or at least resonates closely with the emotional point of the main statement in the lower verse. And Shloka's effective use of enjambment in L4 adds extra emotional weight to the poem. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com