tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post3151884566715245955..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Winter Stars Haiku by Barry GeorgeChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-76166054577341604032013-03-09T14:54:36.427-05:002013-03-09T14:54:36.427-05:00The shift (from the natural to the human, the visu...The shift (from the natural to the human, the visual to the aural, from many to one) is emotionally effective.<br /><br />Barry's well-crafted poem could be read as a response haiku to Basho's below:<br /><br />deep autumn --<br />my neighbor, how does he live?<br />I wonder<br /><br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com