tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post3807995384303011978..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Day's Catch Haiku by Carl Seguiban Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-21573011196308919172015-12-02T08:13:57.605-05:002015-12-02T08:13:57.605-05:00L1 establishes the thematic context while the rive...L1 establishes the thematic context while the riveting image, fishermen "tugging"/<br />"the horizon," in Ls 2&3 enhances the theme and tone.<br /><br />A day's hard work is vividly portrayed through Carl's effective use of the cinematic technique (of the "extreme long shot") and of a concrete action verb.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com