tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post4030100962403071028..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: One Man's Maple Moon: Young Man and Old Hand Tanka by Neal WhitmanChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-15400965035856127612013-06-21T08:34:32.990-04:002013-06-21T08:34:32.990-04:00In Neal's well-crafted tanka, these contrastiv...In Neal's well-crafted tanka, these contrastive behaviors speak volumes about the young man and old hand at a societal level.<br /><br />The detailed description and the good choice of a verbal phrase make this tanka work thematically effectively.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com