tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post4204989909082335282..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Current-Smoothed Stones Haiku by Erik LinzbachChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-15924233868175218752014-01-23T07:45:50.784-05:002014-01-23T07:45:50.784-05:00L1 subtly indicates the passage of time while Ls 2...L1 subtly indicates the passage of time while Ls 2&3 enhance the tone and mood of the poem through remembrance of things past.<br /><br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com