tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post4207889144861861858..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Grey Hairs Haiku by Patricia PrimeChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-5242430022297215992016-12-21T17:15:22.678-05:002016-12-21T17:15:22.678-05:00A bittersweet scene is keenly captured in Patricia...A bittersweet scene is keenly captured in Patricia's understated haiku. Her opening image is an example of fine "sugata," an image that suggests emotion without stating it (for more info., see today's post, "To the Lighthouse: Keijo Style, Fusion of Scene and Emotion").<br /><br />This haiku reminds me of one of my haiku written during my first homecoming trip after eight years of settling in Canada.<br /><br />mother and father<br />sigh in the autumn wind ...<br />my graying hair<br /><br />Haiku Pix Review, 1, 2010 Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com