tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post4433679022730923572..comments2024-03-27T11:10:57.384-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: One Man's Maple Moon: An Inch of Freedom Tanka by Sanford GoldsteinChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-36389812301943794832020-02-07T09:19:20.060-05:002020-02-07T09:19:20.060-05:00Sanford's tanka is structured into two parts (...Sanford's tanka is structured into two parts (the prefatory image & the main statement), and the thematic point of view expressed in Ls 4&5 effectively enhances the suffocating image of Ls 1-3. <br /><br />It might be interesting to do a comparative reading of my tanka below:<br /><br />living alone<br />in a four-walled attic<br />the fifth corner<br />built with bricks of dream<br />I feel a lightness of being<br /><br />Ribbons, 7:3, Fall 2011 <br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com