tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post5365917785191758332..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Fading Light Haiku by Bob LuckyChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-13502475027857751042013-10-21T14:05:44.014-04:002013-10-21T14:05:44.014-04:00L1 successfully sets the scenic/emotive context wh...L1 successfully sets the scenic/emotive context while Ls 2&3, especially the the concluding word, add emotional weight to the poem.<br /><br />On a second reading, L1, "fading light", works effectively on at least two levels, literal and symbolic.<br /><br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com