tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post5632846476702460352..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: One Man's Maple Moon: Blue Eyes Tanka by Tzod EarfChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-14161754905536297762014-04-24T10:33:52.623-04:002014-04-24T10:33:52.623-04:00Hi! Tzod:
It's not a suggestion. I simply poi...Hi! Tzod:<br /><br />It's not a suggestion. I simply pointed out the Implied contrast of Colors (blue vs black/ink dark as implied in the midnight sky).<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-90470184900288453542014-04-23T18:36:35.251-04:002014-04-23T18:36:35.251-04:00Thank you Chen-ou. I like the suggestion "in...Thank you Chen-ou. I like the suggestion "ink dark" also. "Midnight" works for me but does seem well worn (in the west).Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07501258148272169784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-78685718755787588732014-04-22T17:15:35.667-04:002014-04-22T17:15:35.667-04:00The implied contrast of colors (blue eyes vs midni...The implied contrast of colors (blue eyes vs midnight/ink-dark sky) and Tzod's skillful use of a rhetorical question successfully conveys the speaker's feelings, adding psychological depth to the poem.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com