tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post6472139666046712119..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Kingfisher and Mountain Haiku by Polona OblakChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-24758638099315519502016-11-08T11:27:30.996-05:002016-11-08T11:27:30.996-05:00A moment keenly captured!
The quick pace of a one...A moment keenly captured!<br /><br />The quick pace of a one-liner and the fine choice of a verb enhance the hai (comic) of the poem. It reminds me of one of my haiku, which could be read as a counter poem:<br /><br />kingfish jumping over the moon I aloneChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com