tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post7300781143247130705..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Bark Haiku by Polona OblakChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-39344788752550570402016-04-22T10:52:58.328-04:002016-04-22T10:52:58.328-04:00The combined use of syntactic parallelism and syna...The combined use of syntactic parallelism and synaesthesia(transference of the senses)lifts the poem up a notch. And the closing image of an ink-dark night greatly enhances the tone and mood of the poem.<br /><br />For more information about the effective use of synaesthesia, see my "To the Lighthouse" post, titled "A Rhetorical Device, Synaesthesia," which can be accessed at http://neverendingstoryhaikutanka.blogspot.ca/2014/10/to-lighthouse-synaesthesia-transference.html Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com