tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post8321917179265097991..comments2024-03-27T11:10:57.384-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: One Man's Maple Moon: Remembrance Tanka by Susan Constable Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-86085822322744555922015-02-22T09:31:32.031-05:002015-02-22T09:31:32.031-05:00The upper verse establishes the thematic and emoti...The upper verse establishes the thematic and emotional context of the poem while the visual (mental) and auditory images in the lower verse enhance the mood. <br /><br />I appreciate Susan's emotionally effective juxtaposition (of one heartfelt statement and two evocative images) that leaves room for the reader’s input. <br /><br />A well-crafted "middle-of-the-story" tanka.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com