tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post8352726269512972772..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Canada Geese Haiku by kjmunroChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-56664078568732282432016-01-30T08:40:14.414-05:002016-01-30T08:40:14.414-05:00kjmunro's effective verb choice (swimming not ...kjmunro's effective verb choice (swimming not flying) and her placement of lines/arrangement of linguistic elements (such as "canadageese," "swimming," and "V form") lift the poem out of the ordinary.<br /><br />A well-crafted concrete haiku.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com