tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post8615050077076578228..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Hazy Moon Haiku by Srinivasa Rao SambangiChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-17800805379431679582020-02-06T17:53:31.983-05:002020-02-06T17:53:31.983-05:00My haiku below could be read as a prequel to Srini...My haiku below could be read as a prequel to Srinivasa's haiku above: <br /><br />two lines on the test<br />a pregnant silence<br />fills our bedroom<br /><br />Commendation, 2017 Sharpening the Green Pen Haiku ContestChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-69179849254926063502020-02-06T17:40:15.889-05:002020-02-06T17:40:15.889-05:00L1 sketches a visually and symbolically evocative ...L1 sketches a visually and symbolically evocative moon scene while the shift, thematic and tonal, in Ls 2&3 adds emotional significance to the haiku.<br /><br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com