tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post8617723978271708395..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Kiss Haiku by ai liChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-37588192355394397382016-10-18T10:46:57.727-04:002016-10-18T10:46:57.727-04:00L1 establishes a setting that works effectively on...L1 establishes a setting that works effectively on at least three levels (physical, sociocultural and symbolic) while Ls 2&3 describe the taste of that (first/forbidden) kiss psychologically effectively.<br /><br />And the concluding word, "deeper," successfully adds emotional weight to this minimalist haiku (of five words)Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com