tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post8865405964967587646..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: New Year Party Haiku by Sonam ChhokiChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-68450182369648779892013-12-31T08:51:00.931-05:002013-12-31T08:51:00.931-05:00The shift, thematic and emotive, in L3 brings a sm...The shift, thematic and emotive, in L3 brings a smile to my face. <br /><br />Glad to end NeverEnding Story's first year with Sonam's well-cratfed haiku with an aesthetic focus on the 'hai.'<br /><br />This haiku also reminds me of one of the previously-published haiku by kjmunro:<br /><br />in the dentist's chair<br />a poem is polished<br /> by the whine of the drill<br /><br />Into Winter ART 043 Chapbook, Fall 2011<br /><br />kjmunro<br /><br />For more information, see Butterfly Dream: Dental Chair Haiku by kjmunro, which can be accessed at http://neverendingstoryhaikutanka.blogspot.ca/2013/12/butterfly-dream-dentist-chair-haiku-by.htmlChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com