tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post943623878108896360..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Winter Dusk Haiku by H. Gene MurthaChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-21957058008720287742016-03-11T08:29:24.135-05:002016-03-11T08:29:24.135-05:00L1 effectively sets the seasonal and emotional con...L1 effectively sets the seasonal and emotional context while in Ls 2&3, the tapping sound created by an empty beer can against the dock wall not only echoes in the cold air but also in the mind of the narrator/drinker, greatly enhancing the tone and mood of the poem.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com