English Original
sleigh ride
the road ahead shimmers
in moonlight
The Haiku Foundation blog, 2018
Marta Chocilowska
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
雪橇之旅
前方的路在月光下
閃閃發光
雪橇之旅
前方的路在月光下
闪闪发光
Bio Sketch
Marta Chocilowska lives in Warsaw, Poland. Co-author of many domestic and foreign haiku anthologies, laureate and judge of domestic and international haiku contests, Author of Seasons in Polish kigo and of publications in various international haiga and haiku journals. Founding member (2015) and President of the Polish Haiku Association (2018).
A moonlit (Ls 2&3) winter scene (L1) is vividly depicted in this imagistic haiku.
ReplyDeleteAnd it might be interesting to do a comparative reading of the following "sleigh haiku:"
Covid Christmas
nothing but snow
in Santa's sleigh
NeverEnding Story, December 24, 2020
Marion Alice Poirier
Dear Marion, thank you very much for your nice comment and your haiku. My hokku opened the Renku Session led by Lorin Ford:
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Best wishes!
Marta
Dear Chen-ou Liu, thank you very much for translating my hokku. I feel so happy and proud!
ReplyDeleteBest Wishes, Marta