tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post1096718724851507550..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Cool Announcement: Celebrate Tanka Poetry Month with NeverEnding StoryChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-61363790115534435572014-05-01T15:36:46.954-04:002014-05-01T15:36:46.954-04:00Hi! Hap:
I like the theme explored in your poem, ...Hi! Hap:<br /><br />I like the theme explored in your poem, and wonder if the following revision might work better<br /><br />a mockingbird<br />on my porch railing<br />singing his desire ...<br />the last note lingered <br />in that summer air <br /><br />Just a thought for you to use or lose.<br /><br />Chen-ou<br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-56947141594673350312014-05-01T13:05:21.068-04:002014-05-01T13:05:21.068-04:00I'm not sure, Chen-ou, if you want us to post ...I'm not sure, Chen-ou, if you want us to post tanka here, but that's what it sounds like...<br /><br />Mockingbird<br /><br />lonely mockingbird <br /> sits on my porch railing <br /> singing his desire <br /> the plaintive notes <br /> of a blues guitar <br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11840009677652765864noreply@blogger.com