tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post1174745107543413970..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Spring Rain Haiku by Charlie SmithChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-84525588911818016562014-04-19T10:11:42.322-04:002014-04-19T10:11:42.322-04:00One more comment:
This haiku reminds me of the fo...One more comment:<br /><br />This haiku reminds me of the following common saying:<br /><br />The miracle of friendship can be spoken without words... hearing unspoken needs, recognizing secret dreams, understanding the silent things that only true friend know.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-74768722985877768752014-04-19T08:38:46.807-04:002014-04-19T08:38:46.807-04:00L1 sets the scene while Ls 2&3 portray an inti...L1 sets the scene while Ls 2&3 portray an intimate relationship; on the second reading, I think L1 carries symbolic and emotive significance, enhancing the relationship portrayed in L2&3.<br /><br />This is a good example of "what's left unsaid is more important than what's said." Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com