tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post1753944603940905438..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Old Fan Haiku by Kishor MatteChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-16372290430464142972020-11-03T16:53:36.773-05:002020-11-03T16:53:36.773-05:00The following two haiku could be read as sequels t...The following two haiku could be read as sequels to Kishor's: <br /><br />the door ajar ...<br />my shadow and the silence<br />slip out <br /><br />Chen-ou Liu<br /><br />the door ajar<br />a little light spills in<br />to darkness<br /><br />Per Diem, The Haiku Foundation, December 2014<br /><br />Simon HansonChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-74517873506828720572020-11-03T10:04:27.161-05:002020-11-03T10:04:27.161-05:00L1 sets the tone and mood of this relationship hai...L1 sets the tone and mood of this relationship haiku (where there is no depiction of human figures) while L2 works effectively both as a "reply" (in a literal manner) to this anger/outburst expressed in L1 and as a "comment" (in a symbolic manner) on this relationship implied from the haiku.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com