tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post2038863547945302514..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Hospice Window Haiku by Djurdja Vukelic Rozic Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-88214676297933818392014-03-06T07:55:41.377-05:002014-03-06T07:55:41.377-05:00Hi! Neal:
Thanks for sharing your insightful comm...Hi! Neal:<br /><br />Thanks for sharing your insightful comment. I like your concluding comment.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-3459404731367399612014-03-05T19:00:15.365-05:002014-03-05T19:00:15.365-05:00This most artful haiku teaches both the concision ...This most artful haiku teaches both the concision of haiku and the concision of hospice to serve those who may not see the sun rise tomorrow. Tonight the moon is the sun<br /><br />To life,<br />Neal WhitmanUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08247575646519631925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-13249332305231384962014-03-05T07:35:39.631-05:002014-03-05T07:35:39.631-05:00L1 successfully sets the thematic context while L ...L1 successfully sets the thematic context while L 2&3, which allude to a common saying, “instead of spitting into a puddle you should look for the moon there,” spark the reader's reflection on the implied speaker's situation implied in L1.<br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com