tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post2319039270139786259..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Smell of the Sea Haiku by Bryan RickertChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-75737553555127944802018-08-06T08:52:26.866-04:002018-08-06T08:52:26.866-04:00L1 sets the theme while the unexpected and emotion...L1 sets the theme while the unexpected and emotionally appealing last line presents a pleasant ocean trip from a fresh and exciting perspective. This summer haiku reminds me one of my haiku on a similar topic, which I think could be read as a sequel:<br /><br />summer’s end<br />a line of seashells<br />on the windowsill<br /><br />Creatrix, 35, 2016<br />Nominated for 2016 Haiku Foundation Touchstone Individual Awards by Creatrix editors <br /><br /><br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com