tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post2782190286828972810..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Spring Cleaning Haiku by KjmunroChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-71975430157984612762016-09-02T23:28:04.090-04:002016-09-02T23:28:04.090-04:00Dear Kjmunro,
I like the alliteration, particular...Dear Kjmunro,<br /><br />I like the alliteration, particularly the g, s and p sounds providing a feeling rhythm and connection from line to line. Congratulations on your publication in Chen-ou's beautiful journal. Wishing you the best in your writing journey.<br /><br />Blessings,<br />Karen<br /> Karen O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02169168444862156783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-83985126073192431282016-09-02T23:27:52.229-04:002016-09-02T23:27:52.229-04:00Dear Kjmunro,
I like the alliteration, particular...Dear Kjmunro,<br /><br />I like the alliteration, particularly the g, s and p sounds providing a feeling rhythm and connection from line to line. Congratulations on your publication in Chen-ou's beautiful journal. Wishing you the best in your writing journey.<br /><br />Blessings,<br />Karen<br /> Karen O'Learyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02169168444862156783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-24791195240809758252016-08-24T17:34:04.592-04:002016-08-24T17:34:04.592-04:00The shift in tone and mood in L3 makes this poem p...The shift in tone and mood in L3 makes this poem poignant, lifting it out of the ordinary.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com