tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post3769942003921934099..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Cloudburst Haiku by Marilyn FlemingChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-65065923409339976272016-12-12T09:22:39.687-05:002016-12-12T09:22:39.687-05:00The visually and emotionally resonant juxtapositio...The visually and emotionally resonant juxtaposition of "cloudburst" and "the animal" in me/"shaking itself" adds emotional weight and psychological depth to the poem. Within such a short space of seven words (12 syllables in total), Marilyn skillfully explores the connection between one's pre-social primal self and the fierceful force of nature. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com