tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post3886164712602441996..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Age Spots Haiku by Chuck BrickleyChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-30249712212173230652021-04-28T12:14:03.080-04:002021-04-28T12:14:03.080-04:00Much gratitude, Chen-ou, for selecting and transla...Much gratitude, Chen-ou, for selecting and translating this haiku!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12698820107103105613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-50307362195548947652021-04-26T11:38:46.299-04:002021-04-26T11:38:46.299-04:00It might be interesting to do a comparative readin...It might be interesting to do a comparative reading of two of my sand haiku with different thematic and emotional foci:<br /><br />the sand<br />slips through my clasped fingers …<br />autumn dusk<br /><br />Hedgerow, 43, August 21 2015<br /><br />river sand<br />slipping through my fingers<br />winter light<br /><br />Autumn Moon Haiku Journal, 1:1, 2017Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-67481727976658494192021-04-26T11:34:17.609-04:002021-04-26T11:34:17.609-04:00L1 sets the theme and mood while allusive Ls 2&...L1 sets the theme and mood while allusive Ls 2&3 add visual and emotional significance to the haiku and could be read as the narrator's response to/reflection on L1.<br /><br />Time slips through our hands like grains of sand, never to return again. <br /><br />— Robin S. Sharma<br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com