tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post3914377465892635410..comments2024-03-27T11:10:57.384-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Winter Mist Haiku by Kishor MatteChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-33083500234101362602016-11-05T08:45:33.106-04:002016-11-05T08:45:33.106-04:00The contrasts (nature scene vs mindscape; visible ...The contrasts (nature scene vs mindscape; visible water droplets vs invisible nerve cells...), the effective use of enjambment, and the unexpected and yet powerfully imaginative/creative last line lift this gendai haiku up a notch<br />ReplyDeleteChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com