tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post4266187497523180363..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Moonless Night Haiku by Jan BensonChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-37446854856857644542016-07-31T21:05:19.643-04:002016-07-31T21:05:19.643-04:00Marion, so pleased you found layers in this ku.
J....Marion, so pleased you found layers in this ku.<br />J.B.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15594918588519759134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-52462302174007567682016-07-31T21:03:59.535-04:002016-07-31T21:03:59.535-04:00Marion, so pleased you found layers in this ku.
J....Marion, so pleased you found layers in this ku.<br />J.B.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15594918588519759134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-32602080041500783312016-07-31T15:00:30.619-04:002016-07-31T15:00:30.619-04:00I could see the bones and hear the blades of the c...I could see the bones and hear the blades of the chopper upon reading this! It could simply be the ribcage of a washed up whale...but it could equally be the remains of a murder victim. An effective haiku noir.<br /><br />marionSeaviewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564797172487638019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-83818691071842802712016-07-31T14:12:46.719-04:002016-07-31T14:12:46.719-04:00Dear Jan:
Sorry for the typo.
Thanks for sharing...Dear Jan:<br /><br />Sorry for the typo.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing your well-crafted haiku.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-19208816430151709212016-07-31T12:43:20.641-04:002016-07-31T12:43:20.641-04:00Chen-ou:
I hope Ben's is Benson with a typo.
V...Chen-ou:<br />I hope Ben's is Benson with a typo.<br />Very Pleased to have this haiku noir poem posted on your Blog.<br />Sincerely,<br />Jan Benson<br />Fort Worth, TXAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10891436816925432744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-64482056215150897652016-07-31T09:05:29.975-04:002016-07-31T09:05:29.975-04:00Ben's visually stunning and highly atmospheric...Ben's visually stunning and highly atmospheric poem works well as a haiku noir ("a cinematically dark flash non/fiction in verse"), one that reads more like a poetic rendering of the establishing shot of a mystery/crime movie.<br /><br />Note: for more information about haiku noir, see my "To the Lighthouse" post, "Haiku Noir," which can be accessed at http://neverendingstoryhaikutanka.blogspot.ca/2014/07/to-lighthouse-haiku-noir.htmlChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com