tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post4472095547894157194..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Road Map Haiku by Tash Adams Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-48478921660093405402015-08-08T21:32:27.518-04:002015-08-08T21:32:27.518-04:00I'm enjoying the haiku and commentary ☺I'm enjoying the haiku and commentary ☺Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-32798147606327621592015-08-08T21:28:35.511-04:002015-08-08T21:28:35.511-04:00I'm enjoying the haiku and commentary ☺I'm enjoying the haiku and commentary ☺Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-66112076860141540272015-08-08T10:51:35.809-04:002015-08-08T10:51:35.809-04:00The juxtaposition of the will/wisdom of Mother Nat...The juxtaposition of the will/wisdom of Mother Nature (as embodied in Ls 1&2) and the fragility of human life (as manifested by L3) is thematically significance and emotionally resonant, and on second reading, Ls 1&2 successfully carry metaphoric connotations (of Nature as a teacher/inspiration/God). This haiku works effectively on at least two levels, literal and metaphoric.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com