tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post5377547172466310343..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Elephant Skull Haiku by Kokuu Andy McLellanChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-73721652393266520562020-10-21T11:52:08.631-04:002020-10-21T11:52:08.631-04:00L1 sketches a sad death scene that shows one of th...L1 sketches a sad death scene that shows one of the devastating consequences of poaching while Ls 2&3 work well as a foreshadowing of the high death rate of climbing Kilimanjaro (a dormant volcano in Tanzania and the highest mountain in Africa and the highest single free-standing mountain in the world)<br /><br />A sense of "doom and gloom" is effectively conveyed through this haiku noir. <br /><br />For further discussion, see "To the Lighthouse: Haiku Noir," accessed at http://neverendingstoryhaikutanka.blogspot.com/2014/07/to-lighthouse-haiku-noir.html <br />Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com