tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post5558023742808278988..comments2024-03-27T11:10:57.384-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Empty Boat Haiku by Steliana Cristina VoicuChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-70289754872398122772016-04-02T12:42:40.619-04:002016-04-02T12:42:40.619-04:00Dear Chen-ou Liu,
Thank you very much for publishe...Dear Chen-ou Liu,<br />Thank you very much for published my haiku, for your translations and for your kind words!<br />Best wishes,<br />StelianaSteliana Voicuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10375631627364020731noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-74654924911191238382016-04-02T10:23:19.659-04:002016-04-02T10:23:19.659-04:00There is a nice resonance filling the scope of thi...There is a nice resonance filling the scope of this haiku, it starts with ‘boundless’ in Line 1 and continues to the unnamed waters be it sea, or lake or ocean, where the reflection of a boat sits on the water.<br />A truly wabi sabi image, constructed in a freestyle structure of three lines syllables 6/4/5.<br /><br />-- excerpted from the judge's comment, which can ba accessed at https://wildplumhaiku.wordpress.com/haiku-contest-2015/<br /><br />This haiku is highly cinematic; it reads more like a poetic rendering of the long take of a sea/river scene with an empty boat drifting toward to the moon, filmed in an extreme wide shot.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com