tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post5639950498897205929..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: A Room of My Own: Viral Demons TankaChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-62186411471428451322020-08-13T07:14:46.636-04:002020-08-13T07:14:46.636-04:00Please give me feedback on these poems:
Tanka:
Nas...Please give me feedback on these poems:<br />Tanka:<br />Nasal swab uptown<br />COVID took my appetite<br />Packed onto the bus<br />Gratitude, love, joy and pain<br />Take the bitter with the sweet.<br />Haiku:<br />Hazel's fiery strikes.<br />Moonbeams aglow on the roof<br />Wish upon a star.<br />Senryu:<br />Fuzzy old yard dog<br />Corgi no match for her love<br />Let the trumpets play.<br /><br />I have written 135 poems, mostly from southern rural African American perspective but I am not connected to any community of poets yet. I desire to publish my work but need some feedback.<br /><br /> Marilyn Simpson, aha.plus920@gmail.com<br />Marilyn Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15817768394552081812noreply@blogger.com