tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post6239649912644951962..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Scarf Haiku by Rachel SutcliffeChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-45930568785823359032016-05-25T15:43:51.585-04:002016-05-25T15:43:51.585-04:00Me too. Super haiku.Me too. Super haiku.Bernadettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16081723411607355136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-49320794066572868952016-05-25T09:40:14.675-04:002016-05-25T09:40:14.675-04:00I can almost hear the nervous click of the knittin...I can almost hear the nervous click of the knitting needles - very effective.Seaviewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564797172487638019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-14550773027507226322016-05-25T08:11:11.681-04:002016-05-25T08:11:11.681-04:00Tension, this good choice of a double-duty word th...Tension, this good choice of a double-duty word that provides the scent link (in Basho's sense of the phrase) to the opening line, lifts the poem out of the ordinary.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com