tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post7498981122120495136..comments2024-03-27T11:10:57.384-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Darkness Haiku by Dave ReadChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-34881754737219773242018-04-16T16:14:59.312-04:002018-04-16T16:14:59.312-04:00In my opinion, it seems like a mix of a spirituali...In my opinion, it seems like a mix of a spirituality and melancholy. Wonderful haiku.Nicholas Klacsanzkyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09462544566096224140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-73012755068367342922018-04-16T13:19:50.011-04:002018-04-16T13:19:50.011-04:00Powerful indeed! I like the combination between da...Powerful indeed! I like the combination between darkness and the slipping of some one's identity Congratulations Dave Read!Manoj Sharma (Chintak )https://www.blogger.com/profile/10293101813088183885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-25370063082329509462018-04-16T09:56:50.279-04:002018-04-16T09:56:50.279-04:00re:
darkness ...
her name slips
into it
Dave Rea...re:<br /><br />darkness ...<br />her name slips<br />into it<br /><br />Dave Read<br />Acorn, 37, Fall 2016<br /><br />Very powerful verse, showing how sometimes the minimalist haiku can evoke as much as a longer approach to this genre. <br /><br />More and more recent haiku are showing exactly why a verb, and one that does more than just pop its head over the parapet can really enforce a haiku. <br /><br />I'd call this something of a modern classic!<br /><br />warm regards, <br />Alan<br />President, United Haiku and Tanka Society<br />Co-founder, Call of the Page<br />Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-48113788453732536722018-04-16T06:59:42.829-04:002018-04-16T06:59:42.829-04:00L1 sets the theme and mood infused with symbolic s...L1 sets the theme and mood infused with symbolic significance while the effective verb choice in L2 adds emotional weight and psychological depth to the poem.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com