tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post7732068298198164929..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Oblivion Haiku by Dietmar TauchnerChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-80882019821377345622016-01-26T08:39:04.964-05:002016-01-26T08:39:04.964-05:00In L2, "layers" of 'oblivion' ef...In L2, "layers" of 'oblivion' effectively provides a scent link (in Basho' sense of the phrase) to its preceding line, 'snow' "upon" 'snow.' And L3 gives added poignancy to the poem.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com