tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post7754466695915222061..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Tulips Haiku by Agnes Eva SavichChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-34452581884444892582016-02-06T20:12:47.638-05:002016-02-06T20:12:47.638-05:00Agnes, sweet!
Congrats.
Agnes, sweet!<br />Congrats.<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10891436816925432744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-20160536176964813092016-02-06T17:08:29.614-05:002016-02-06T17:08:29.614-05:00The phrases "in shadow" and "in lig...The phrases "in shadow" and "in light" in Ls 2&3 effectively provide a scent link (in Basho's sense of the phrase) to L1, "partly" "cloudy," and Agnes's use of the zoom-in technique is emotionally effective.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com