tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post8208953026718589145..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Twilight Sun Haiku by Marian Olson Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-35052156105543821082021-04-20T18:58:54.320-04:002021-04-20T18:58:54.320-04:00The following poem could be read as sequel:
pull...The following poem could be read as sequel:<br /><br />pulling light<br />from the other world ...<br />the Milky Way<br /><br />Yatsuka IshiharaChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-21817531056238952982021-04-20T15:42:14.636-04:002021-04-20T15:42:14.636-04:00Marian's haiku ("ichibutsu shitate")...Marian's haiku ("ichibutsu shitate"), with its focus on one object/scene (L1), flows smoothly from start to finish, and on a second reading, L3 is layered with multiple meanings (at least visual, emotional/psychological ...), effectively carrying symbolic significance.<br /><br />FYI: To the Lighthouse: "Ichibutsu Shitate (One-Image/Object/Topic Haiku)," accessed at https://neverendingstoryhaikutanka.blogspot.com/2015/01/to-lighthouse-ichibutsu-shitate-one.htmlChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com