tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post8523723166411481860..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Rabbit Prints Haiku by Kay L. TracyChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-86822514836011305322014-03-06T08:08:48.657-05:002014-03-06T08:08:48.657-05:00Hi! Neal:
Yes, I concur. Thanks for sharing your ...Hi! Neal:<br /><br />Yes, I concur. Thanks for sharing your thought.<br /><br />Chen-ouChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-65822335129213872822014-03-05T19:18:20.581-05:002014-03-05T19:18:20.581-05:00This haiku teaches us how to create a jolt in the ...This haiku teaches us how to create a jolt in the reader. Start in one place which gives a feeling of "ah" and then take us to a second place which gives a feeling of "ooh." ah - ooh = jolt! <br /><br />Your learner,<br />Neal WhitmanUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08247575646519631925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-52034982728999320702014-03-02T15:32:38.096-05:002014-03-02T15:32:38.096-05:00In her visually evocative haiku, Kay skillfully ex...In her visually evocative haiku, Kay skillfully explores the color, and light and dark contrasts and successfully conveys an ominous feeling in L3.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com