tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post8842956606379729747..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Nightfall Haiku by Rachel SutcliffeChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-42987084386721438112015-02-02T13:26:54.169-05:002015-02-02T13:26:54.169-05:00An excellent haikuAn excellent haikuJohn Oliver Byrnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07648404187534165916noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-32580326353760683132015-01-30T18:18:33.865-05:002015-01-30T18:18:33.865-05:00I agree with Marion's comment. Beautiful image...I agree with Marion's comment. Beautiful imagery.Bernadettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16081723411607355136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-88296880283657145092015-01-30T14:01:43.934-05:002015-01-30T14:01:43.934-05:00This is indeed an effective ku. I really like the ...This is indeed an effective ku. I really like the idea that the stars are carried closer to the shore on the incoming tide. <br /><br />marionAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-38331731169701545012015-01-30T09:44:09.008-05:002015-01-30T09:44:09.008-05:00Rachel's effective use of a pivot results in s...Rachel's effective use of a pivot results in seeing this poem from two different perspectives (top-down and bottom-up) that create different visual foci.<br /><br />The absence of punctuation creates an ambiguity that helps stir the reader's imagination, prompting him/her to explore the many possible layers of meaning from different angles.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com