tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post9170940599584518206..comments2024-03-28T12:59:41.910-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Issa's Insects Haiku by Alan SummersChen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-1039211111638261762017-02-19T06:50:16.753-05:002017-02-19T06:50:16.753-05:00Alan:
Made me chortle. We call them "pets&quo...Alan:<br />Made me chortle. We call them "pets" here in the Deep South,<br />One other construction note, , , the unexpected enjambment of the verb on the tail end of L2... Works!<br />Jan in TexasAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10891436816925432744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-3144676537297181702017-02-19T00:06:13.880-05:002017-02-19T00:06:13.880-05:00The unexpected yet interesting L3 enhances the &qu...The unexpected yet interesting L3 enhances the "hai" aspect of this allusive haiku. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com