tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post918947065256940612..comments2024-03-27T11:10:57.384-04:00Comments on NeverEnding Story: Butterfly Dream: Winter Haiku by Lorin Ford Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐http://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-786207835641480928.post-67425812176293406432014-02-17T08:40:24.719-05:002014-02-17T08:40:24.719-05:00Lorin's well-crafted phrase, 'in the passa...Lorin's well-crafted phrase, 'in the passage/between dreams' (not the cliched phrase, in the dream), combined with the visually and tonally evocative context-setting line, makes this haiku psychologically effective.Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐https://www.blogger.com/profile/06235248170011255532noreply@blogger.com