Wednesday, September 23, 2020

Butterfly Dream: Hole Haiku by Gail Oare

English Original

valentine’s day
the hole
in her martini olive

Gail Oare


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

情人節
她的馬提尼橄欖
有個洞

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

情人节
她的马提尼橄榄
有个洞

 

Bio Sketch

Gail Oare, a retired science publishing executive, writes poetry, short fiction and nonfiction. She lives near Pittsburgh.

1 comment:

  1. This is a fine example of employing the technique of "show, don't tell."

    The image of Ls &2, functioning as a synecdoche, works effectively as visual commentary on the mood of her "valentine’s day," L1.

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